Homework 4th October:
Play the Sudoku game. Start with easy and try and work your way up to EVIL!!
http://www.websudoku.com/
To write another suspense story and post them on here:
Use a different setting
2/3 characters
2 bad/strange things that happen
How you escape
Ending
This story is the wierdest story i have ever heard so i am going to tell you.
ReplyDeleteIn Washington D.C,people were in danger so, they decided to circumnavigate to another country.......
In a month they noticed that the land was near them.
At night,they reached the land and took their luggages out of the ship.People went to have a look at the land.After a while, they heard some steps!They were so curious that they all forgot about hiding and stuff."What was that?'everyone started to chat and ask questions to each other.Sometime later,a giant boy appeared and searched for someone. He started run around and found another giant boy. Americans were so frightend thatthey started to whisper about what was going on.Suddenly,the boy stoped and shouted "Huh?"who was that ??"He turned around and found Americans.He started to talk quietly "Hey guys ,i don't know you but you seem to be nice.So,go into my pocket and hide in my pocket.That boy wants to steal everything i have and he will try steal you guies .So,Do as i ask you to do!"Then he turned to the bad boy and gave him his toy.When Americans were in his pocket ,they were scared if the boy might be bad.After a while, they were asleep Americans all dreamed about going back to Washington D.C.When they were awoken they were at Washington D.C and it wasn't dangerous anymore.Then they all said "I saw a maggic pocket!!!!" "I was in there also!"and everyone thanked the giant boy
The End!!!
By Heejae
WHAT HAS HAPPENED TO USA!
ReplyDeleteUhm, are we going to find that crazy jelly monster? questioned MinJoo. Well, if your scared and freaked out of course we will go! HeeJae laughed. Come on girls, we have to find out who's fault it is to turn all of USA to a crazy upside down city. All right? Or do you want to stay in this nonsense? I questioned.
Both of the girls stopped and looked at one place miserably.'' Sorry Maxi we were really just being a bit crazy, but of course we won’t let USA down!''
So we stepped in the forest, first it was really ok, but later we started thinking about this city of Nonsense we got really got creeped out! We really were scared of that Jelly monster plus the dark night coming up.
Ewe, just stepped into a piece of this discussing red jelly thing!! MinJoo screamed. We were all scared of these woods and especially now we thought of our old memories, our nightmares, like Bloody Marry…
But then the Jelly monster appeared right in front of us, he was roaring for us to get out of the forest.
The Jelly monster started chasing us into a house, which was really small. But from the inside it was enormous! Hello! Anyone here! We shouted. But then dancing skeletons appeared and came closer. HeeJae and MinJoo were so scared that they stood still in horror but when I shaked them they told me they were acting they were not real, so I did that too. Wow! This really worked! I whispered to them. Thanks Maxi but, lets go home before the door closes of this mysteries house! Mumbled HeeJae almost asleep. But then the door closed.
''Lets just lie down on this warm floor'' MinJoo added.
On the next day we woke up Jelly was dropping as if it was crying, but when I woke up there was a crying jelly monster, he was crying because he did not want to turn USA to a crazy place, but he just wanted to make a show with his group: Ribble the skeleton, Furball the blue lion and Vicky the witch .He also told us that we should help, but we really did not want to. When the Jelly monster heard us say that, he told Vicky to put us into the Iron cage of doom.’’ Help! We shouted, but no one nice came by to rescue us.
Then Furball put a password on and then put a sticky note on which said this cage goes to the other side of the forest. However MinJoo had a paper with her all the times, Well don’t ask me now cause I’m in the actual story and I also want to know WHY WOULD MINJOO HAVE A BLANK PAPER! Now MinJoo tell me something interesting about this paper!! HeeJae laughed. But MinJoo confidently said: If you rip a piece of that paper you could go to the place where we where before this cage, but it wont mean the monsters wont know we did that, so that’s the bad and the good news! Lets rip a piece of paper MinJoo!! We shouted.
So MinJoo agreed very fast because she hated that smell of the Iron cage.
Whoosh, this was a fast ride! we all shouted. But girls, didn’t MinJoo say the monsters would know whatever we do?! I asked.
COME HERE YOU FOOLS! WE WILL GET YOU AND YOUR MAGIC PAPER! Shouted the Jelly Monster. We all got so scared we ran forward, later when I saw our footsteps from where we came before, Furball appeared from nowhere and he was holding a sack which was 23m long. So instead of falling into it we turned like a reindeer sledge but in front of us was the angry Jelly monster, which was holding a special future ball, so I just ran to him and got it because I thought that contains something to do with turning USA back to normal, but then ‘’Ahh! Help!’’ we shouted while we were flying with the future ball heading to the city of USA, and while we passed every building it turned the right way up. When we finally came back down with a welcome of the USA villagers thanking us for bringing this world back to normal! What we also did good after the party was a show with the Jelly monster and his group! After all everyone was happy in this story!
THE END
I did an easy Sudoku in 23.05 minutes.
ReplyDeleteI thought it would be a good idea to play football on this Saturday morning. I was doing a crossbar challenge until I kicked the ball too high and it rolled into our shed. So I went in.
ReplyDeleteI took a few steps until I saw something on the wall. "EEEK!" I shouted and ran outside. I then called dad to help me. We then went inside together. When looked it was still on the wall. "This is your shadow," said dad calmly. We kept on walking until we found the ball in a little play house. It was far too small for dad, so I had to go in. I crawled in easily the doorway was full with cobwebs so I barely got through. I saw the ball in the corner and I quickly scooped it up . I crawled out through the doorway and we then went back to the garden.
My dad then told me to move the goal so I wouldn't shoot it in the shed. We then went in to have lunch which was Spaghetti Bolognese. After that everything continued as normal and we had no more accidents.
One stormy night I thought it was a good idea to go hunting in a forest with ferocious animals.So I drove for one hour finally I reached the Forest it was as dark as a ogre's belly and as silent as a mouse's footsteps he was terrified because he thought a wolf was gonna rip him into pieces with his jaws Joe questioned "what was that?" he heard some footsteps behind him and some plants getting wacked into each other Joe slowly turned around and it was actually a little squirrel.It was getting dark so he made himself a tent and slept in it.
ReplyDeleteThe next day he got out of his tent and suddenly a wolf came so Joe went back in his tent and waited for the wolf to go away.Joe wondered when am i gonna get back home but then he just remembered he brang packed lunch so he ate a sandwich but the wolf could smell it so he sprinted out of his tent with the wolf chasing him then he found his car opened the door and jumped in and slammed the door into the wolf's and drove away.
I thought it would be good idea that me and my friend would stop by at a motel because we had gone for a trip in a car. We were walking in the motel but we saw it was closed so we decided to camp near it . We then made our tent and went in. My friend had slept and I was hearing spooky sounds so I went out to see but no one was there and...
ReplyDeleteThe spooky sounds were still coming and I thought they were coming from the motel so I went into the motel. Suddenly a skeleton jumped onto me, I threw it of my self and it broke, so I continued. I was walking up the stairs and a huge skeleton appeared in front of me so I looked down and saw a line of skeletons standing in front of the exit and...
I jumped of the stairs, went into a room and locked it I then opened a window and jumped out. When I was out I started to run to my friend and woke him up I quickly went into my car and told my friend everything while I was driving. I hoped this was the first and last time this happened but it was not.
It was the 31st of October. It was halloween. Lucy was very excited she was going to be a witch. Her costume was ready. She was going to wear a black dress with a black hat and and witch nails and black boots. It was 7:15 when she had woken up. Then she got dressed and went downstairs to have breakfast. She finished her breakfast and went to the car and then to school. At school she was waiting for the haunted house. Finally it was her turn. When she went in, there were bat sounds . She felt like ghosts were flying around her. She heard skeleton bones rattle. Then a mumy jumpped in front of her. Lucy screamed. She started to run. Then the mumy started to run. She thought it was part of the haunted house . She had no idea of where she was . She looked around. She noticed the house was very dirty and it had spider webs,bat nests,bones on the floor and skeletons around. Where is the mumy taking me she thought to herself in a scared way. Suddenly the mumy stopped, opened a door, pushed Lucy in. Then locked the door and went to another room. What should I do Lucy thought. She tried to think of ways to escape. Then suddenly she had an idea. She looked around. There were no windows the room was very creepy. There were webs and dust everywhere.The room was dark because the only light came from a candle. There wasn’t many things in the room. Just a chair and a dusty bed. Then she picked up the candle and started to turn to the left and walk straight. She found a door and went through and found herself in the corridor in the house. She tried to remember which way the mumy had brought her and at the same time she tried to keep calm and be as quiet as she can. She found her way out and when she looked around there were no spider webs,no bat nests,no bones ,no skeletons and no mumy. She quikly went out of the haunted house. Suddenly she woke up. Thank goodness she thought it wasn’t real . It was just a nightmare.
ReplyDeleteTitle : Susan and Danny and the graveyard
ReplyDeleteOne rainny day at night, Susan and Danny were outside for a walk but Danny were bord so he went to home again and took his favorite bouncy ball meanwhile Susan was scared because it was ranning and it was night. But Danny came early so she didn't got worried anymore. Susan asked "Which ball did you bring?" and he answerd "My favorite bouncy ball." then Susan got surprised and asked again. "Why did you brought that ball?" then he answerd "Because I just want to!" then Susan shouted "Are you silly? If you bring that you might lost the ball !" but Danny answerd "It will be ok because I will keep the ball safely." Suddenly the ball rolled over and went inside the graveyard main gate. Then Danny looked down and screamed "Where is my ball?" and Susan answerd "I think the ball went to the graveyard" then Danny got really surprised and shouted " What? Your just saying a joke right?" and Susan replied "No, I saw something went inside the graveyard main gate! but let's go to the graveyard main gate.
Danny and Susan arrived at the main gate. The main gate looked like the haunted house gate so Susan felt quiet scary. But Danny wasn't scary because he was a boy but he got worried about the ball. But Danny had an idea and asked to Susasn "Can we go inside the graveyard?" and she replied "Yes, but you have to safe me ok!" Danny answerd "Ok." so they came inside, where they have a lot of graveyard.
Susan was scared so Danny maked her laugh. Now Susan was not scary anymore. Then Danny found something that looked like the ball but he saw the ghost and really scary stuffs. And there was a broken lampost with a blood and a dead person. Suddenly the dead person was turned to a ghost and Susan saw that and she screamed really loudly so Danny ran to her and whisperd "Why did you screamed?" and she answerd "I saw a ghost!" then Danny replied "It can a ghost because it is a graveyard but don't worrie about it. So Susan didn' worried about it.
After hours and hours Danny found a ball at the corner so Danny was really happy and also Susan. They came back home safely and they all the thing about it to there parents. Now there parents out and Danny is not aloud to take his balls at outsi9de because and it can go to some scary places.
THE END!
5th October 1916,
ReplyDeleteIt was a normal day. We flew around enemy airspace to try and shoot some planes down. But suddenly a Germen fighter plane shot my left engine and it caught fire. I would have to eject but I was still in enemy territory! If I ejected here I would be held prisoner and be tortured to tell ally secrets! But it looked like I would have to eject. I slowly reached my arm towards the eject lever and finally I pulled it.
Whilst all of this was happening, the German plane who had shot me called the nearest base to bring out a search party to find me! I landed safely and fell down on my chest and looked up at the sky to check if anyone had seen me fall but it looked like they hadn't.
About 5 minuets later I heard the noisy sound of a diesel engine and saw 4 camouflage pickup trucks all with a gun mounted on the back. I looked around for any hiding spots but there were none. I heard the first few bullets go past me and a shell blow to pieces. I slowly got up and put my hands above my head. They took me back to their base and showed me to the base commander. ''Who are you?'' bellowed the base commander. ''Elwyn King.'' I said. The base torturers used waterboarding on me until the twelfth of October and on that day I planned my escape. I was going to steal a gun of a guard and shoot myself out of this hell. the next day I took a pump-action Remington 870 of a security guard and ran for the gate on the other side of the base. Suddenly a security guard jumped out from the main building with gun in hand but I was to quick for him and shot him in the head. I sprinted full speed at the gate and ran out the base. ''I did it!'' I said relieved.
WHAT HAS HAPPENED TO USA!
ReplyDeleteUhm, are we going to find that crazy jelly monster? questioned MinJoo. Well, if your scared and freaked out of course we will go! HeeJae laughed. Come on girls, we have to find out who's fault it is to turn all of USA to a crazy upside down city. All right? Or do you want to stay in this nonsense? I questioned.
Both of the girls stopped and looked at one place miserably.'' Sorry Maxi we were really just being a bit crazy, but of course we won’t let USA down!''
So we stepped in the forest, first it was really ok, but later we started thinking about this city of Nonsense we got really got creeped out! We really were scared of that Jelly monster plus the dark night coming up.
Ewe, just stepped into a piece of this discussing red jelly thing!! MinJoo screamed. We were all scared of these woods and especially now we thought of our old memories, our nightmares, like Bloody Marry…
But then the Jelly monster appeared right in front of us, he was roaring for us to get out of the forest.
The Jelly monster started chasing us into a house, which was really small. But from the inside it was enormous! Hello! Anyone here! We shouted. But then dancing skeletons appeared and came closer. HeeJae and MinJoo were so scared that they stood still in horror but when I shaked them they told me they were acting they were not real, so I did that too. Wow! This really worked! I whispered to them. Thanks Maxi but, lets go home before the door closes of this mysteries house! Mumbled HeeJae almost asleep. But then the door closed.
''Lets just lie down on this warm floor'' MinJoo added.
On the next day we woke up Jelly was dropping as if it was crying, but when I woke up there was a crying jelly monster, he was crying because he did not want to turn USA to a crazy place, but he just wanted to make a show with his group: Ribble the skeleton, Furball the blue lion and Vicky the witch .He also told us that we should help, but we really did not want to. When the Jelly monster heard us say that, he told Vicky to put us into the Iron cage of doom.’’ Help! We shouted, but no one nice came by to rescue us.
Then Furball put a password on and then put a sticky note on which said this cage goes to the other side of the forest. However MinJoo had a paper with her all the times, Well don’t ask me now cause I’m in the actual story and I also want to know WHY WOULD MINJOO HAVE A BLANK PAPER! Now MinJoo tell me something interesting about this paper!! HeeJae laughed. But MinJoo confidently said: If you rip a piece of that paper you could go to the place where we where before this cage, but it wont mean the monsters wont know we did that, so that’s the bad and the good news! Lets rip a piece of paper MinJoo!! We shouted.
So MinJoo agreed very fast because she hated that smell of the Iron cage.
Whoosh, this was a fast ride! we all shouted. But girls, didn’t MinJoo say the monsters would know whatever we do?! I asked.
COME HERE YOU FOOLS! WE WILL GET YOU AND YOUR MAGIC PAPER! Shouted the Jelly Monster. We all got so scared we ran forward, later when I saw our footsteps from where we came before, Furball appeared from nowhere and he was holding a sack which was 23m long. So instead of falling into it we turned like a reindeer sledge but in front of us was the angry Jelly monster, which was holding a special future ball, so I just ran to him and got it because I thought that contains something to do with turning USA back to normal, but then ‘’Ahh! Help!’’ we shouted while we were flying with the future ball heading to the city of USA, and while we passed every building it turned the right way up. When we finally came back down with a welcome of the USA villagers thanking us for bringing this world back to normal! What we also did good after the party was a show with the Jelly monster and his group! After all everyone was happy in this story!
THE END!
One morning mum left me a note to get my sisters ready for school and take them to the bus. I done everything the way she said. When I noticed that my sister saw something in the house on the other side of the road it was too late. The car I was in drove away around the corner. I was worried that my sister might get in trouble because the house was derelict for ages and the ghosts ruled it, well other ways it was a Haunted house. I knew my sister pretty well; she was really silly and curios about everything she saw. I told my Best Friend Ulgen what I saw she told me something that really made me worried here’s what she said. “I heard that many people went inside the house and it was said that they never came out. Scientists observed the house and said the only creatures inside it are ghosts and skeletons” We decided to ask if we could leave school early to go search for her. Luckily the teacher knew about the house. “Many people told me that that house once belonged to a friendly rich man that died an illness that the doctors never found the cure to. After his death he was buried in the graveyard behind his house. Many people think he is now a ghost and rules the house with his friends. Be careful. I wish you good luck in your journey.” Our teacher said.
ReplyDeleteDo you think that even after such a scary warning I would be interested to go into that house and meet the old man who is said to be a ghost? If you would I totally disagree with you. When we got on the taxi the driver warned us once again that there might be a ghost in that house once again, but we said we have a really important job there. When we arrived the house looked like it was derelict for about a year. The house didn’t look like any other house on the street, it had broken windows and a flapping gate, the door had thick scratch going down it looked like a monster with sharp and thick claws once lived her, and of course nobody would want to come to a place where a monster once lived. I could hear my sisters voice coming from somewhere in the back garden. I knew that if we go on our own I will simply get lost. So I told Ulgen to turn her torch on, so I could see something in the dark that might help. With the torch still on we go down to the house. Suddenly a black cat jumps down from the roof “If you want to see your sister again you must go to the ghosts, I’ve heard them say they’re going to turn hr in one of them. I hope you understood” she meowed and disappeared in the dark of the night.
corridor, along the bumpy floor, past the table with the baked chicken, up the stairs, through the gloomy room and right into the ghost meeting room. At the very moment in the ghost meeting room a meeting was held. “Hello, how are you? I’m the president of the haunted house,” Howled the ghost from his gold throne. “We are looking for my sister she ran away this morning,” I say. For a moment it was a complete silence. “Your sister was here I saw her come in through the gate this morning. I am not that sure where she is now but I’m going to keep her with me until she’s a ghost to,” declared the ghost. After a moment he changed his mind “Fine I will let her go only I’m not wasting my time on looking for her, you will have to look for her yourself,” he announced. “Of course we will,” we declared and set off.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly we saw some rocks come out of the ground. They stood side by side like a path leading to a mystery behind the house. I hoped onto one off the rocks and signal Ulgen to follow me down to the graveyard. Unfortunately the whole passage was covered with spikes and bones of animals and some where even human bones. “Ouch!” Ulgen screams. “What happened?”I ask her. “I’m OK, that bush is very spiky, it stuck to my skirt,” she replies. Suddenly a skeleton appears in our way. “What do you need here?” he asked. “My sister came here this morning and Im looking for her,” I say.”Follow me” he whispered. Together we hoped over the rocks, through the spiky tunnel past the angry tree and into the grave yard. I saw my sister other side of the graveyard. She was with her new ghost friend. They were playing hide-and-seek around the graveyard, they didn’t notice us come. I came nearer “Do you want to go home now?” I ask my sister. “Of course I do,” she replied and went back to the exit.
When we reached the exit I noticed that the entrance was locked. “Oh no, what should we do,” I asked Ulgen. Before she could answer we saw the black cat that told us what to do in the beginning we were glad to see her. “I will open the doors for you, but you have to promise never to come back,” she declared. “OK I’ll never” I promised. The doors opened and we ran out. As we were about to run out the little ghost came out. “Where are you going?” he cried. “I can’t just leave and forget him, he saved my life!” screamed my sister. “I want to come with you!” shouts the little ghost. “Maybe he can stay in the shed behind our house,” my sister suggested. “I like that idea,” I say.
And of we go back to our house all together. We become friends with the little ghost, and every night we listen to his stories that make shiver of fear.
THE END
İt was 2:00 me and Amina had gone outside for a walk.İt was a sunny day
ReplyDeletewe were talking on the walk we turened around to go back but we found
our selves in a graveyard.İlooked around to find the exit but there was no exit
we were stuck.
Then we heard sounds then the weather grew dark the clouds covered the sun then it started to rain.There were ghosts flying above. We ran to a way that there were no ghosts flying but they followed us.Then a skelton got up and started walking towards us.
We ran as fast as we could then suddenly we found the exit .We went our the exit
that was close we thought.We went back home.
It was a cold and dark night and Sam and his son returned back to the hotel they were staying in, it was a six star hotel and had about 600 rooms. The hotel also had a huge eating area at the bottom, it also had a swimming pool which was closed because it was winter.
ReplyDeleteSam and his son went into the elevator but by mistake pressed the wrong button so the elevator went to floor 31 which was the floor which had not been used for a long time. Sam went onto the floor with his son they kept on going and suddenly a man in black holding an axe appeared in front of them. So they ran back, but while they were running back suddenly a door fell onto them. Jack quickly pushed it of himself and started to run to the elevator.
Sam then pressed the button of his floor and suddenly the light goes in the middle of no where. "Jack can you manage to remove the shaft in the lift please?"
"I will try my best dad,"
So Jack tried and managed,Sam was quite happy. So they went over the shaft, the next floor seemed near, so after great difficulty they managed to climb up the rope.
When they were at the floor they ran to the exit of the hotel and managed to escape in there car. They hoped this was the last time this happened but was it....
Hotel de la Fredo.
ReplyDelete‘’Are we there yet?” Questioned Jessie.
“No, unfortunately we have 1 hour left.” Answered Dad.
‘’Bump! Thump!’’ Rumbled the car and disappeared!
‘’What are we going to do now?” Max complained. ‘’ No car, no phone!!!
However right after his last word they fell into the hotel they wanted to go –
“Hotel de la Fredo”.
‘’ Ha, we are there! You said that we were in trouble and look now!” Jessie giggled.
‘‘Oh,!!!!” Max rolled his eyes.
‘’Come on now we have to check in!” Their parents shouted. After that loud shout, of course they stopped complaining and went to the reception however no one was there. They only found the room card lying on the table. Max decided to pick it up and..…
They flew to a very long corridor, which had no doors. A red ghost appeared in front of them! He had a giant hat on his nose and a blue stick in his hand, he waved it and turned mom and dad to the stones… Jessie fainted! Max was standing still like a statue.
When Jessie woke up she only saw her brother and no ghost around, she started crying. Max got awake too and said: “Stop crying, lets try to find our parents and turn them alive”
“How can we do this, we are not magicians” sobbed Jessie.
They decided to explore the corridor. Almost at the end they saw a crying girl.. She told Max and Jessie that this hotel used to be the most fabulous hotel in the whole world, however the red ghost appeared and turned this hotel the spookiest hotel ever.
“What are we going to do now? Sobbed Jessie.
‘’I guess sister we should ask that girl.”
“What is your name?’’
‘’Mine? My name is Marie’’ she whispered. “Ah…I lost my parents who were turned to the stones.” Said Marie after her new friends told her their similar story. “I think I know where is the ghost’s room is. The entrance is well hidden, but I know how to open it!” She smiled.
Max was confused ”Why didn’t you go there before, you are here for some time already?”
“I was very scared to go there alone, but together we can try, I hope”
“Great! Lets go there, Marie! But quietly, the red ghost can always hear us. And, you don’t really want him to. Right?”
Every one agreed and went behind Marie. When they were walking Marie suddenly stopped and said: “Near these dark walls there is a secret door, which can be opened with a magic mushroom, which I have been looking for one month”
“Marie, are the mushrooms growing on the parquet?” Max asked curiously.
“No, no, of cause not. There is a secret garden just right there. Look!” And she led them to a very little door not visible at the beginning.
TO BE CONTINUED...
It was a dark garden. Every one was looking eagerly for the magic mushroom, Suddenly Jessie saw something glowing so she bobbed down and shouted:
ReplyDelete“I think I found it!” Jessie was actually right. ‘’Stop shouting didn’t you forget about RG?’’ said Max.
When Marie ripped the mushroom of the ground and whispered the magic words:
“Little mushroom, Magic mushroom, please show me the glowing door!” A giant door appeared, when they went in the room they only saw a red button but nothing else…
‘’This is your entire fault Marie” at the beginning shouted Max. However Marie did not say anything and ran to press the button. And guess what, an orange stone lay on the floor and their parents statues appeared. Marie took the stone hugged them and told:
“Take this piece and bring it to your mom and dad, put it right in front of them and hug your parents.”
Jessie ran and put the rock in front of the parents and called Max so the both could hug their parents. Marie did the same. Finally their parents were turned back into normal and all of them went down the elevator and drove away with Marie’s magic limousine!!
If you want to know what happened to the red ghost, go away from your mothers and fathers, and when you feel safe I will tell you: the stupid and mean Ghost saw the orange rock, and started dancing like a chicken heading to the WC. Do you think you know the rest or should I tell you? Well, those of you who don’t know listen; he went to the giant sink and put his face in it then danced to the toilets and flushed himself in.
So as you want to know the end of the story here you are: “THE HOTEL DE LA FREDO IS BACK TO A BEAUTIFUL 5.5 STARS HOTEL!!! AND you can visit it during the coming holidays!!!
THE END
It was a normal day and I was playing friv on the computer. I was staying in a luxury hotel in America and my dad had come with me. Suddenly the telephone rang and I said ‘’I’ll get it!’’ ‘’OK.’’ said my dad. ‘’Hello? Who is it?’’ I questioned. ‘’ In 5 seconds a key will be dropped outside your room. Pick it up and read the note.’’ I couldn’t resist the opportunity to find out what the phone call meant.
ReplyDeleteI heard a thud and anxiously crept towards the door and tentatively opened it. On the floor there was a little box with a note attached to it. I picked it up and read the note. It said: this key gives you special access to floor –Z2!...
‘’Dad, can I go to explore the hotel for a bit?’’ ‘’OK’’ said my dad. On the way to the lift I thought ‘’Do I really want to do this?’’ But somehow my curiosity got the better of me...
I made my way towards the lift. And when I got in, I turned the key in the lock and the light turned green. I felt the lift jerk down towards the mystery floor.
When I got down to the floor there was an eerie noise that went like this: ‘’He, He, He!’’ It scared me a bit, but I decided to find out what it was.
I turned the corner to find a mad manager! He said ‘’Come with me!’’ One look at his face told me to run so I ran as fast as I could to the lift, and promised myself I would never go down there again.
On the 1st of January on my 10th Birthday we went to a hotel not far from the frosen sea in Secret Island. Me and and my mum arrived, a feeling like something mystirius might happen to us in this hotel ran down our mind. The hotels name was so interesting and hard to remember. The wind blew hard t the hotel and tht made it look like it’s a humongus castle. Crows are always reminding you abot witches and stuf like that. So now you know the idea of what happened to us on our very first day here, trouble only trouble. So maybe you think we should have canceled the trip, I thought that to guess what I knew it might not be a very enjoyable stay here...
ReplyDeleteWe walk into our room, and unpack our stuff. Just then my mum phones me and asks to go and find dad that went somewhere in the restaurant. I wonder “Why do you need to phone me when you are just out in the balcony?” I thought, but I didn’t bother to look (This was a great mistake). I tiptoe down the stairs not to wake up the visitors that already went to sleep. When at last I get to the floor the elevator works I was really tired. I enter the elevator. After one minute it shakes and the lights go of. After a moment I understand that the lift stopped. I open the doors and instead of ending up on one floor I’ stuck in between. “OH NO THIS WILL BE LOADS OF TROUBLE!” I thought…
The hall is empty and no one is there, not even my dad. I thought of going back to the elevator but my body froze. The lights started flickering and finally turned off. It was a long power cut. I was stuck here not knowing what to do. First I decided looking for the stairs would be the best idea, but in a few minutes I noticed that impossible. I tried to phone my mum but that was awful waste of time because it was too hard to look for it in my purse. At last the horrible dark time is over the lights turn back on. I think that was just in time…
Skeletons were all around me. I was so scared “HELP!!!!!” I screamed and ran around the elevator I knew it was pointless, but I had nothing else to do. They didn’t chase me they knew I would get tired of calling. Then I start hearing puffs of a machine and the blowing of air. Everything goes back, and guess what it’s a horrible ghost that was ma king it happen it wasn’t real. When my dad came I told him what happened. And it was a long story he told me…
“Once a long time ago there lived a really rich man he owned a whole hotel. He worked here for all of his life. Unfortunately in 1400’s New Year he was killed by his brother who was jealous of him. One dark night he came to the hotel and went into his room, he woke his Brother up ‘If you don’t give me your hotel I will kill you’ he said. The man said ‘ No I’m not giving you my hotel. With a move of a sword his head was lying on the floor he ran to the curtain and threw his body down into the waterfall. Since that day he comes every New Year and destroys a person’s holiday, even though it is not his brother in charge anymore,” he tells me and mum when we got back to the room.
“I will never go there on New Year again!” I say.