Monday, 28 April 2014

Hazal
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3 comments:

  1. Minjoo13 May 2014 at 01:29

    It was a good story and I liked it. But I think you could make it fun!!!

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  2. Amina13 May 2014 at 01:32

    I liked your story, but you could make it a bit more interesting and move them a bit more!

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  3. Achintya verma13 May 2014 at 01:36

    I like it good

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