It was a good story and it was a good idea. You should make it more exciting though.
it was a good story and it had lots of speech but it is quite boring
Good story I like it. But asNorden sais make it more exciting!
I like that story too! But you could make something happen when they go in the city.
Cool! I like this story, but its sort of boring!! You could maybe make it more interesting!!!!! :D
I like it but say some thing at the cite
I like it Min Joo but i think you could make it more fun.
I like your story but you could put some music
It was good story but it was little bit boring at end bit
I like your story but it is sort of boring. I think you should make it more fun.
Nice story but a bit boring oh and also put music next time maybe it would be better
The story is a bit boring
It was a good story and it was a good idea. You should make it more exciting though.
ReplyDeleteit was a good story and it had lots of speech but it is quite boring
ReplyDeleteGood story I like it. But asNorden sais make it more exciting!
ReplyDeleteI like that story too! But you could make something happen when they go in the city.
ReplyDeleteCool! I like this story, but its sort of boring!!
ReplyDeleteYou could maybe make it more interesting!!!!! :D
I like it but say some thing at the cite
ReplyDeleteI like it Min Joo but i think you could make it more fun.
ReplyDeleteI like your story but you could put some music
ReplyDeleteIt was good story but it was little bit boring at end bit
ReplyDeleteI like your story but it is sort of boring. I think you should make it more fun.
ReplyDeleteNice story but a bit boring oh and also put music next time maybe it would be better
ReplyDeleteThe story is a bit boring
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