Thursday, 27 February 2014

Arthur's Group


6 comments:

  1. I liked the way you presented the garden and how you had Bonggyun and Nicholas playing tag on the field.

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  2. keenanmaruszewski27 February 2014 at 05:05

    I liked all of it

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  3. I liked that you should almost every part of the school and that Nicholas and Bongyun were playing tag on the field. Next time make the interview a bit shorter

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  4. I liked your imformation about school,but you did interview too long

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  5. I like the way you explained parts of school and I like Bonggyun and Nicholas playing tag on the field

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  6. I liked the way you showed the places. But I think you could say more things about the places.

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