Thursday, 27 February 2014

Hazal's Group


10 comments:

  1. I liked the description of the school and the playground bit, but you could have done an interview.

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  2. keenanmaruszewski27 February 2014 at 05:02

    i liked that you used description and when you made your voice a bit funny

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  3. I liked when you explained about places. But I think you could speak more longer.

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  4. nice vedo

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  5. I liked your playground bit but it was too long

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  6. I liked that explained about lots of places but your voice was a bit funny.

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  7. I liked the way you made the voice funny but you could have interviewed somebody.

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  8. interview someone i liked the funny voice

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  9. Its not a funny voice!

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  10. I liked how you explained many places but ı think you could have interviewed someone.

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