I liked the way you said why we should buy it and I also liked the ending. I think you could have done it without the script though.
I liked that you decorated the bag very well, but you still were using the script.
I really liked your video!!!!! I also liked when you said that you will have a great school year!!!!! Maybe next time you could actually get the lemonade out but thats only if you can, Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really liked video and Iliked when you said about the rainbow bag.
I liked the name of your invention!
The name of the invention was cool!
I liked the concept of a torch bit the bag looked more like a box.
I liked the name for the bag but in adverts you don't look at the script but at lest you could hide it so no one could see.
I think that you could do it with out the script. I also liked the ending.
I think you could do it with out the script.I like your ideas.
I liked the way you said why we should buy it and I also liked the ending. I think you could have done it without the script though.
ReplyDeleteI liked that you decorated the bag very well, but you still were using the script.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your video!!!!! I also liked when you said that you will have a great school year!!!!! Maybe next time you could actually get the lemonade out but thats only if you can, Bye!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteI really liked video and Iliked when you said about the rainbow bag.
ReplyDeleteI liked the name of your invention!
ReplyDeleteThe name of the invention was cool!
ReplyDeleteI liked the concept of a torch bit the bag looked more like a box.
ReplyDeleteI liked the name for the bag but in adverts you don't look at the script but at lest you could hide it so no one could see.
ReplyDeleteI think that you could do it with out the script. I also liked the ending.
ReplyDeleteI think you could do it with out the script.I like your ideas.
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