Umm, the voice was a bit weird but, anyway i really liked how you made it look so real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As you know, you shouldn't of really sped up the voice because you sounded really weird.
Hi!!! I think it was great overall but as you know you shouldn't have sped it up. But I think everything else was pretty good, I likes it when Nicholas traveled onto the basketball court!!! I liked you vide a lot it was very interesting!!!
I liked that you put at the end we hope you buy our machine.
ReplyDeleteI liked when you said "Our brand new invention will change the world!" but I think you shouldn't of sped it up.
ReplyDeleteUmm, the voice was a bit weird but, anyway i really liked how you made it look so real!!!!!!!!!!!!!! As you know, you shouldn't of really sped up the voice because you sounded really weird.
ReplyDeleteI liked how you showed how it works.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you showed how it work!
ReplyDeleteThe idea is good, I would like to have one but your voice seemed really funny like you were traveling through the machine hahaha, overall good advert.
ReplyDeleteI love your travel machine but sounded funny
ReplyDeleteI love your travel machine. Next time I think you should not make it faster because you sounded like a chipmunk.
ReplyDeleteHi!!! I think it was great overall but as you know you shouldn't have sped it up. But I think everything else was pretty good, I likes it when Nicholas traveled onto the basketball court!!! I liked you vide a lot it was very interesting!!!
ReplyDeleteI meant video
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