Wednesday 26 March 2014

Homework Wednesday and Thursday- to write a newspaper report
I suggest you plan it tonight and write it up tomorrow. It can be about a discovery you found at school/home. A record being broken by someone. You could even write it about your invention.

HEADLINE

INTRODUCTION
-       Who is writing and for what newspaper
-       What you are reporting about (record)
-       Who it is

MAIN PART
-        When
-        Where
-        Why (teacher/friend had previous record)
-        How
-        Speech with every point you write
o  Person who broke it
o  People who inspired them to do it
o  Parents
o  Friends
o  The person who HAD the record

-        Possible questions: 

How do you feel about it?
How/why did you start?
Do you think anyone could break it in the future?

END
Two sentence summary, with a question at the end.


REMEMBER
-Paragraphs (when you start writing about something new- leave a line)
-Capital letters, full stops
- commas, ?, !
- CONNECTIVES!!

15 comments:

  1. Bones of dinosoures were discovered

    This is Ali reporting here. Just yesterday a boy named Ali discovered bones of dinosours.

    This shocking discovery happened just yesterday!!!! Every one was shocked, because this looked almost imposable to happen.It happened when Ali was playing and started getting bored so dug up a whole, the next thing you saw..... were dinousares bone. Pretty hard to believe right. Later it was discovered the bones were of a T-Rex. who died by a rock falling on her head because the head was fractured right till the brain, but of course the braid is not there. Here is an interview with Ali the person who found the bones, how did you fell when you saw the bones, I was shcocked, at first I thought they were those plastic toys!!!! What did your mother say. My mother said nothing for about 5 seconds and then laughed thinking I was joking but then I showed them to her and thats when she called her naighbours over to tell them. Ok thankyou for your time Ali. So thats what Ali said.
    This will be continued tomorow!!!!!!!

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  2. HIGHEST JUMP (7METRES) by arthur rees

    This is Nicholas reporting here from the bisi school.

    Yesterday a record was broken for the highest jump!!! everyone was crowded around Arthur Rees because he jumped so high. Arthur is 10 years old,but his legs are springy no one thinks they can break this outstanding record. Arthur has been training by jumping off cliffs and falling in water.

    It happened on the pavement in London nowyone could believe their eyes the blond haired boy never knew he could do this, but suddenly BBOOIINNGG he jumped right through the air. He told his mum and brother about this but they did not believe him until he showed them when he went outside everyone was waiting for him it was CROWDED his mum and brother were stunned they couldn't believe their eyes they thought they were just dreaming.
    Arthur rees felt amazed he had become famous. The spot where the jump was marked with white chalk. If you want to visit London come and visit the mark.

    "How do you feel about the jump Arthur"?"I feel really amazed I thought I would never do it". "Who inspired you to do it"? "My brother he kept on annoying me about it but I always thought to myself why doesn't he do it". "Who was holding the previous record"? "I think Martin Howard had the previous record so I tried to beat him".

    This is the bisi news reporter Nicholas and thank you for reading this magnificent new record by Arthur. Will anyone ever beat this outstanding record? nobody knows.

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  3. Tomas Fernandes27 March 2014 at 07:14

    This is Tomas Fernandes reporting from BISI school.

    The largest school in terms of pupils is the city Montessori School in lucknow,India,which had a record enrolment of 39,437 children on 9 august 2010 for the 2010-11 academic year. The school admits boys and girls between ages two and five,who can then continue their education to degree level.In 2002,it won the UNESCO prize for peace education.The city Montessori has come a long way since Jagdish Gandhi and his wife Bharti first opened it in 1959 with a loan of just 300 rupees <$63,ponds 22>.Then it had a grand total of five pupils!

    so the largest school in world of 39,437.Can any school beet the record? This is Tomas Fernandes signing out.

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  4. This is Ali continuing the report of the boy who found dinosoure bone right in his house.

    You all know the boys name was Ali just like my name, by now scientists have discovered that the bones were of a female dinosoures who was giving birth, but was in too much pain and started walking to a place where rocks were falling and then it hit her head and very sadly died. We dont know if the children died with her or lived on. Ali was also very sad when he herd this because he loves animals even if it is a T-Rex.

    For now there is no more news about this, so do you think that the children survived? no one knows, this Ali sighning out goodbye

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  5. 'The first ten Year Old lands on the Moon!'

    This is James Pryor writing for The BISI newspaper, on Friday, February 21st 2014. We have very exciting news today. The first ten year old, Luke Davidson, landed on The Moon!

    "Luke, how did friends and family feel about the new recored?" "Well I think that my mom and dad where very happy of what I accomplished. I also think other kids will want to do the same."

    "How did you do it?" "It took me two years of hard training. For example, every day I lifted weights, I ran six kilometers, I started a special diet of space food and practiced in the simulators."

    "Who inspired you to do it?" "Neil Armstrong inspired me." "Why?" "Neil Armstrong inspired me because I saw how cool it was to walk on the moon with gravity and I really like rocket science"

    "Who was the person to hold the record before you?" "I am pretty sure that it was Charles Duke when he piloted for Apollo 16 in 1972. Charles was 37 years old."

    "So how do you feel about the new record you set Luke?" "I feel very good about it," he said. "I want to continue studying science and help other kids learn about Space."

    "Luke thank you for your time. Good luck with your future missions. This has been James Pryor reporting about Space with our new star, Luke Davidson. Has he inspired you to go to the Moon?"

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  6. BISI newspaper 27.03.2014
    WORLD’S EARLIEST KID TO LEARN THEIR TIMES TABLES

    Hello!!! This is Amina reporting for the BISI news paper, about the recently broken record on the earliest kid to learn their times table. And the person who broke it is LILY BROWN!!

    This amazing thing happened just yesterday 26.03.2014. Lily has an older sister who is rubbish with math's and leaves her books any where she likes. Well who picks them up? Who else than Lily. And if something interesting gets into the hands of a small five year old they begin to read it. That is the way little Lily learned her times tables. Now Lily and her family live in Turkey but Lily's mother tongue is English.

    And now Lily has come to tell s a bit about herself and her personal life.

    “What do you think you will go through while popular?”

    “I think I will be successful and I will be the earliest kid to learn division”

    “Do you feel sorry for the last person who had the record?

    “Yes I feel very sorry, and I wish I could help them do something else to become famous again.”

    Now we talked to Lily shall we talk her mom:

    “Are happy your daughter is so successful?”

    “Yes I am very pleased that she is so famous, but she is still young, and I would like her to have a peaceful child hood”

    “Do you want her to continue?”

    “Yes, but I don’t want it to mess up her child hood”

    As you heard Lily's mom wants her to stay a kid until she is ready to move on. Moms always care about that allot. But unfortunately today's newspaper is finishing and we have to stop our report.

    As you see Lily a 4 year old has already learned all her times tables and is so successful. Do you think anyone will break this record?

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  7. This is Minjoo reporting for British newspaper.

    Last week the record was broken by a girl named Alicia who is just 10years old. Alicia found a treasure full of gold. When Alicia’s family heard about it they couldn’t believe it. Also other people couldn’t believe it too. No one could no how Alicia founded the treasure , so people are really noisy at Alicia’s garden try to find out the secret.

    How do you feel about it “Well I feel so happy that I found a treasure box and I am so exciting to be famous!” How did you find it? “ I was digging a hole then I suddenly felt something with the spade So I just took it out and luckily it was a treasure box!” Do you think anyone can find the treasure at the future?” No, because the gold won’t come even you dig it so deep because there is not much also they are buried well”

    Alicia thinks no one will not beat the record. Alicia is the first child to find the treasure in the world. Alicia is so famous in her city and where she is living. Every year lots of people is coming to see the treasure and the gold. Her house is so famous so she became rich!
    Her family thought it was just a joke when she found the treasure.Next year Alicia is going to find some more things.

    Do you think someone will beat this record? No one knows.


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  8. This is Ulgen reporting from the BISI school.A new record has been broken.The record was collecting the most books.This record was broken by a girl called Emily who is 16 years old.

    This record was broken two days before."How did you do this record"?"I really like reading books so as ı read books ı also started collecting books"."How do you feel about this"?"I feel happy to have been able to break this record"."How do your parents feel about you breaking this record"?My parents also feel happy and proud"."Why did you want to break this record"?"I wanted to break this record because ı am a person who really likes to read so ı thought that it wouldn't be too hard"."What inspired you to do this record"?The books that ı have read inspired me they were so interesting"?"What do you think other kids feel about this"?"I think other kids would also want to break a record"

    Do you think this record will be beaten?

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  9. BISI school newspaper 27-3-2014

    The tallest girl in the world, Lusiana perpemick!

    Hi, this is Heejae reporting for the BISI newspaper. Today is the best day for Lusiana pepermick for bieng the tallest prischool girl in the world! She is only 4 years old and she can speak 4 languages and she is taller than the secoundary boys but she is still so cute (just her face) and is still growing. Now I am interviewing Lusiana. "Hi, Lusiana! I feel so tiny infront of you! Now would you tell me how you feel bieng the tallest prischool girl in the whole entire world?" "Mummy? Where are you? Mama!" "Well, she Is still a baby........"
    "How do you feel, little Lousiana?" "Aah!, Mummy I want you NOW!, And I feel happy......."
    "Well, good! And what do you think you'll gonna do with your big body?" "Idon't like it, I want to be short!" "Okay, so will you get a shot to make you stop growing?" "I don't like taking a shot so, I won't do it!" "Then you will have to stay in the guiness book forever!"
    She was shocked and she said she wanted to take a shot. I hope she wil stay in the guiness world record book forever but if she doesn't stop growing....... she will get in BIG trouble!

    Now, I am going to interview the tall girl Lousiana's mum. " How do you feel about your daughter then?" "I feel so sorry for her 'cause she will geeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet in BIG TROUBLE! I am so nervous about how people will think about my girllllllllll! I hole she doesn't get into any trouble and grow well like the other girls......." "Well, it was nice to meet you and I know that she has to decide by herself rather bieng short by taking a shot or, bieng a giant."

    I interviewed Mrs pepermick who sobbed a lot. I was sooooo happy to interview the famous star Lousiana pepermick and her mum. She was taller than a giant recorded in 2013 guiness record book and no one might not be ought to break this outstanding record!
    Lousiana said she is scared of both taking a shot or growing tall like a monster.

    As you can see a little girl with a bad apetite can be 1m 90 cm tall, do you think anyone can break the record........we'll see!

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  10. This is Arthur, writing for BISI news.

    A 16 year old boy just broke the world record for the most Lego pieces owned by one person (7,726,456!)
    Richard Nesbo has recently been added to the Guinness world record book for owning the most Lego pieces by one person; the previous record holder was Martin Andre with 6,987,693 pieces.
    Here is what Richard has to say about it: “I can’t believe it! I had my first Lego set when I was 4 and it was a Lego city fire station. From then I have had loads of sets and I once I made a life-size model of my little 4 year old sister with her real clothes.”
    It took 20 volunteers 5 weeks to count all his pieces, working 9 hours a day. “He has loads of different pieces. Some of them I have seen before, but there are lots of pieces I haven’t seen!” said Lego expert Dan Goodman.
    Here is his mum to tell us about it. “He has inspired his sister, by making the model for her and she plays with her Lego Duplo all the time. I am so proud that he still plays with his old toys and I was amazed when he broke the record.”
    Will anyone break this record? It is unlikely, but possible, isn’t it?

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  11. The new way to travel
    This is Thomas Norden reporting for Zek newspapers to tell you about the first motor less travel machine. It was tried out by Nicholas Periam and Keenan Maruszewski at BISI.

    It was made by KTN Industries and it was tried out by the duo on the 27th of March 2014. It was witnessed by the whole school and a lot of the villagers as well. “This is probably the greatest invention of all time!” said the experts who had come to see.

    To use it you sit inside the machine and say where you want to go. Then the antennae will vibrate. When it stops you will be in the place you want to go. There are some safety rules to be followed to allow this new way of traveling to be safe. “As soon as the vibrating stopped there was a funny feeling in my body. It was like I was dissolving into thin air and then a second later I could feel myself being glued together again and then when I opened my eyes I was there!” Nicholas said afterwards.

    This travel machine is not cheap though and comes with a $500,000,000 price tag. It might be worth it though as you never need to refuel it and it also comes with an iPad. Bill Gates has bought it today and he says it was absolutely brilliant!

    So if you are there and have got a lot of money to spare this is one of the best options to buy. As long as rules are followed then I would like to say something to all the people who have this magnificent invention. Have a safe (but very short) journey!

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  12. Hi i am here at BISI school and a new worlds record has been broken that is for being so old and not finishing school yet so lets go and se if we can get an interview on Sam.

    So we got an interview on Sam,Sams mom and dad,freinds and Jan the person who had it.So Sam how do you like after breaking a worlds record"well i do not feel good because i wanted to have a job but i do like being a worlds record breaker"do you think enybody coupe break this record again"well i do not think that because most kids want to have their own feature.So lets go and interview his parents,so how do you feel like afternoon finding our your child has broken a record"we feel like he should have a future and be happy"do you think any one can break it in the future" i dont think so because some children might want to have their own job,now lets move on to friends.So i have here Matthew,James and Roni, so how do you feel like nowing that your friend is has beeten a worlds record"well we feel happy for him,Do you think some one will beat that record" i would say mabey people can beat his record mabey no. The last interview so we have here Ben that had this record,so how do you feel like"i feel that he got the record fair so i am happy for him.

    So do you think Sam will be beeten or do you think he will stay in his place for ever.
    We will find out next time on BISI newspaper!!!!

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  13. Hello, this is Maxima writing for the German newspaper "WAZ"! Today i'll be telling you about something that happened to a girl called Caroline who beat the world record of eating hotdogs!!!!!!

    Caroline was only 9/5 years old when she started eating hotdogs to beat the world record so she could be popular in her class, and have some friends. Caroline actually was really nice but she had dark green hair and people said her hair was ugly! But it was unusual, and i actually liked it!

    At home, Caroline was always sad and told it to her mum. One day, her mum planned to make a hotdog competition party, so people could see how good she was! Not only that, but she also wanted to beat the world record so badly, which was set by Mr Boardman, he ate 69 hotdogs in only 10 minutes!!

    So on Caroline's Birthday the 14th March 2014, the hotdog party started!!!
    All the girls in her class came and they started...
    And guess what the results were: Lara with 65 hotdogs, Sarah with 56 , Mia with 47, Zoe with 29, and Linda with 17, but our champion was.......... Caroline with 70 hotdogs!!!!

    However, when I interviewed her she didn't really have a smile on her face! I moved close to her and started talking:
    "Hi there, my champion!" "Oh, umm, hi," "Why are you so sad? you are the record breaker!" Then I saw the tears rolling down her eyes and then he sobbed, "Look, they all hate me now because i beat the record. And I only wanted to do this competition to get friends!" "Oh, then, I'll talk with you later then!" I couldn't believe this, it was horrible until.........."Hey Caroline, do you want to be friends? We are really sorry, we were a bit jealous first, but now we think you are amazing!" Her tears rolled away and she hugged her new friends! then she came back to me and we finished our interview. She said she started because she wanted to get new friends and beat the world record of eating hotdogs so she can finally eat some junk food.

    You really might not believe that a 13 year old record, was beaten by such a little girl! But you might understand how she did it if i tell you that firstly, her favourite food was hotdog so she was so happy to eat all of them!! And secondly, because she was on a small diet, so she was happy to eat some delicious food!!!!!!!!!

    So I guess this is enough of me speaking and I hope you will try to beat this record yourself!!!!! And by the way, Mr Boardman, are you going to try to beat the record again?

    Anyway hope you enjoyed and one more question.... Do you think somebody will ever beat Caroline?


    By Maxima!

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  14. Something Found

    Charlotte here from BISI news. Someone named Bob found a bone in his backyard.

    Bob said "I found the bone in my backyard and three months ago I started it". Bob also said "the person who had the big giant bone inspired me. And I started digging in my backyard."

    Do you believe that another person is going to find another bone? This is the BISI news

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  15. Record Broken

    Keenan here reporting on a new record that has been broken, you are reading awesome newspaper.

    There has recently been a record breaker, his name is Brendan Maruszewski. He broke the record for longest time playing football (soccer). This event took place on the 13th of July 2013. It turns out that the 13th is his birthday so he must be very happy.

    we sent one of our interviewers to try and ask him a few things and this is what they had got,

    We asked Brendan how he feels about accomplishing this record and he said "Well, obviously I am very happy and proud of my self that I was able to do this and succeed at it. I would also like thank my family for support".

    Brendan had played for 25 hours strait with no rest on his schools football pitch. Yes schools, he is in school. Now to be that young to play for that long is amazing.

    Thank You for reading,
    Awesome Newspapers

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