Thursday 13 March 2014

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25 comments:

  1. Dear mr. Boardman,
    I strongly disagree to homework, especially as much as we are getting at the moment.

    In my opinion homework is a waste of time as children have the right to spend time away from school relaxing. Not only do children disgust it, but surveys show that 46.5% of parents don't understand why homework is given and a further 50% of them struggle with making their children do homework.

    Looking at the results, why should homework stay? Did you like homework when your were a child? Homework is probably going to be kicked out sooner or later so why not now to make the rest of our childhood enjoyable? It's a pain for teachers to tell students off for not doing it, and simply as summary of my letter, homework is a waste of time, so why should we keep it? After you have read this I hope you do your best to give less or no homework in the future.

    Sincerely,
    Thomas Norden

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  2. Dear Mr Boardman

    We should change our lunch or pack our own lunch because everyone don't like their food we can not go when we didn't finish eating our food.You can give us burgers and for breaks you can give us cookies.Why can't give us cookies for break and burgur for lunch.

    Bonggyun

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    1. Mr Boardman (Maxima)13 March 2014 at 09:45

      Dear Bonggyun,
      I have also seen the kids not eating their food, and it would be great having burgers and cookies for lunch! However I am only one teacher and apart from that, not a director. You see, even me as a teacher, i dont like the lunch, but at least there is something to eat! :)))

      Sincerly,
      Mr Boardman (Maxima)

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    2. Mr Boardman (Maxima)13 March 2014 at 10:16

      In addition, please don't forget that eating burgers or cookies every day is very unhealthy and in the end boring!

      Best Regards,
      Mr Boardman (Maxima)

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  3. Dear Mr. Boardman,

    I think children should get extra extra playtime because children need to have more exercise, I dont think only 50 minutes of running is good enough, do you? Wont children children get bored if they play only 50 minutes in the day, how would you feel being in that position? It becomes excruciating for children sitting at a table for the most of the day.

    Children also get a chance to make friends and to mend their fights from before. Sitting all day makes us lethargic. Would you enjoy sitting on a chair for the whole day? I dont think so. When you read this letter I hope you understand the feelings of us childeren.

    Your sincerely Ali

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  4. Dear mr Boardman
    I like school but the thing I don't like isHOMEWORK! Surely everybody hates homework and all the kids argued about it. In my opinion You should give no homework because the things you learn at school is the homework.

    I feel that the kids need rest at home.Did you like homework when you were a kid?. Do you belive in others belive in me.

    Sincerely Achintya

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    1. Dear Achintya,
      You are right about that I didn't enjoy homework when I was small but if we didn't have it school days would probably last until 4:30pm. I agree that you need rest but that's what weekends are for isn't it. Part of school is doing homework, but even if I did change my mind I'm only one teacher.

      Sincerely,
      Mr. Boardman (Thomas Norden)

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  5. There is jot suppoed to be a your i put it by mistake.

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  6. Maxima Schiller13 March 2014 at 06:01

    Dear Mr. Boardman,

    Haven't you ever thought that some of your homework was boring and you got too much, that you even had to wake early at 5 or 6am to finnish it!!!!!! Well in my opinion I really think you could give us less or even no homework as we already are working for 5 hours, which is a very long time!

    Didn't you ever feel so happy when you were playing football with your friends, and your team is winning but then you forget to do your homework and you have to run home as fast as you can? I hope that you really think about this, and let me know when you changed your mind!!!!!!

    From Maxima


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  7. Dear Mr Boardman
    In my opinion the lunch food should be changed or children should bring in their own food from home.The lunches should be changed because they taste disgusting and most of the children hate it.The lunches don't taste like anything anyone would want to eat.The plates always have food on them and are't properly cleaned.The trays are always soapy and sometimes have little bits of food on them.Would you like to be eating from plates with food that aren't clean or trays with soap?The soups are even more disgusting.I am pretty sure you wouldn't want to eat the disgusting lunch food.So after you have read my problems I hope you understand and decide to change the lunch food,regards Ulgen

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  8. Dear mr. Boardman

    I am sure you had your times when you were a kid and said to your friends we should have time to rest at our homes so now i bet you don's want to be one of thoes teachers that said, "no you have to have to do your homework, " don't you Mr. Boardman. So mr boardman pleas think and if you say no the take a look at your childhood.

    And say should I be bad with thoes children or good. And you at least now that you will make the work for us and if you still say no then it is bad for us and you.

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  9. Dear mr Boardman
    I have been thinking about break at school and in my opinion i feel that we should have more break.The reason i feel this because children need fresh air to concentrate.They need exercise and it is also important to socialize in the playground.

    If you stay in the classroom for too long children get bored and frustrated and do not do any work. didn't you like to use up energy when you were a child after you have read some of my comments i hope you can agree with them. sinsrly hazal

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    1. Dear Hazal,

      Thank you Hazal for your letter, it was quite informative.

      I ensure you, we as teachers do understand what you mean but believe me the time given to the students as break is sufficient for them to gain fresh air, exercise and socialize. As far as your boredom is concerned my child ask your teacher to make your subject so interesting that you have no time for boredom.

      Sincerely,
      Mr.Boardman (Ali)

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  10. Dear.Mr.Boardman

    It is really not fair to have little bit of playtime! Don’t you think? Well I think so you do. So I think we have to have extra playtime. When you were child did you have fun at playtime? I think you did.
    The reason it is fair is that we study for an hour and we need some exercise! Well I need some exercise too! I feel that we will have more playtimes from now on. Surely if we have extra playtime we will study more hard and we will get stronger because we did lots of exercise!

    From .Minjoo

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    1. I can understand that you want to play and get some exercise, However you can't get extra playtime because I think there lots of playtime and I think that is that is enough, don't you think so? So, here is my advice, Don't just sit around on the table like that and play as much as yo can, I mean play as fun as you can!

      From: Mr.Boardman

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  11. Dear Mr. Boardman, In my opinion the lunches at our school taste disgusting and ought to be changed.
    I am very, very sure that you wouldn’t like to eat something you just found a hair in, or would you? I say that when you see the way they wash the dishes and trays is horrible, my best friend has been in the kitchen and seen it all. When I come to think of all the disgusting bits that could be stuck to your food or fork you feel like skipping lunch or throwing it in the bin!!
    And that is JUST the plates!! Believe me the food is a long way from better! Once they even served VEGETABLE lasagna!! The food also looks squishy and mashed up.
    But among all these things there are nice tasty meals you can find. Some of them are pizza and ice-cream. But unfortunately there are only a few of those.
    So after you have read my concerns I really hope you understand and try to make the cafeteria food better.
    You’re sincerely Amina

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    1. Nicholas Periam13 March 2014 at 10:23

      I am sure that no one likes the lunch even I don't. I have seen lots of people escaping without raising their hand because they don't like the food. No I don't think i would eat food with hair in it.
      The plates always do have bits stuck to them and the chefs don't wash the plate properly. I hope they change the food and clean the plates better.

      From:Mr. Boardman (Nicholas Periam)

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  12. Dear Mr Boardman

    I am writing to you to say that we should have no homework instead of extra homework.

    I believe that because I think we already do lots of writing, maths and other subjects at school so we don't need to do it all again at home. I feel that when we get home we should play with our toys or watch TV or play with our friends instead of being stressed about it and having to stay in all day doing it. It is better if we just rest at our houses so we are energised for school and concentrate well. Our mums and dads argue with us about homework so it would stop arguments about homework. Surely once you had boring homework and I bet you didn't like to do it either.

    So after you have read my concerns I hope you have decided not to give us any homework.

    Yours sincerely,
    Arthur

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    1. Dear Arthur,
      You are right I didn't like homework and ı also think that you need some time to do what you want but homework is so that you understand what you have done at school better. So I have decided that sometimes I wont give you homework.
      Yours Sincerely,
      Mr. Boardman (Ulgen)

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  13. Dear Mr Boardman

    I do not think that we should have so much homework because it is very boring. When school finishes I think that it is our time to do whatever we want so why should we have to do homework? Also homework is repeating the same thing that we do in school.

    I would like less homework because I really enjoy practicing my golf. It is okay to have homework every now and then but I do not think that it is okay to have homework every day. When you were little did you enjoy homework? I do not think so.

    Sincerely,
    James

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    1. Dear James

      I do understand that you love golf and you want to get better on it,but homework is good for you to practice what you learned at school.
      So I will give less homework

      Your teacher
      Mr Boardman

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  14. Tomas Fernandes13 March 2014 at 09:38

    Dear Mr Boardman

    I am writing to you about granting us extra playtime.
    My reasons for this is because we can then focus better in class. In the meantime we are able to develop our sport skills like basketball and football which will be useful for the school. At the same time our minds will become fresh to take on other school tasks more effectively.

    We currently have one hour playtime. Do you think it would be possible to add a further 20 minutes? I personally do not think it will not make a huge impact in our school learning because we would use playtime as a learning experience.

    So after you have read my reasons and explanations, I would really hope you would consider this matter and treat it with importance.

    Yours faithfully
    Tomas Fernandes


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    1. Mr Boardman (James)13 March 2014 at 11:02

      Dear Tomas Fernandes

      Learning at play time is not the same type of learning as school. I do agree team sports such as basketball and football teach good learning skills. I will ask the school board if we can add an hour to the end of the school day twice a week for team sports.

      Your teacher,
      Mr Boardman

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  15. Dear mr. Boardman

    In my opinion I think we should do no school work. First of all why do we have to write in books. I think that mostly everyone who went to school hated doing work at school.
    When you were at school did you like writing in books and listening to your teacher? we should have much more time outside and much less time inside (unless you get detention).

    Second of all why can't children choose what subject to do and what to do for homework because most of the students get bored.

    Sincerely,
    Nicholas Periam

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    1. Mr. Boardman (Amina)13 March 2014 at 12:27

      Dear Nicholas,
      I do not undrstand why shouldn't we do work in school. And how are kids supposed to learn then? I did not like to listen or write when I was in school, but I knew I needed it in the future. In my opinion if there is no school work you wouldn't be able to learn. Welll what is school for if there is no school work?
      But I tottaly agree for the second one. Kids should be able to choose or vote what they want to do in class or for homework.
      I hope you understood what I mean
      Your sincerly Mr. Boardman (Amina)

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